Sabtu, 12 November 2011

This is my own narrative text



Po and Lilo

Once upon a time, there lived a panda named Po in a beautiful forest in China. That forest really comfortable for animals, especially wild animals.  He had a color balanced, white and back. His eyes big. He is fat. He very cheerful and very kind. His voice aloud.
One day, Po walked in the forest. He heard a scream and walked toward the sound source. He saw a honey bear trapped and hanging on the tree. 

“Hei what happened to you?” asked Po.
“First please help me, second i will tell you about this,” answered the honey bear.
Po helped him immediately. After that, the bear told  the things that had happened to him.
“When i like to search for food, i inadvertently stuck there. I did not know that there is a trap. Some hunters have entered this forest certainly.” told the honey bear.
Po said, ‘’ How poor you are! What’s your name?”
“You can call me Lilo, thanks for your help.” said Lilo.
“Ya, you're welcome. Do you want be my friend?” asked Po.
“Ofcourse yes! But are you sure? You know i eat many kind of  meat, if i hungry i can eat you.’’ said Lilo.
 “Hahahaha i believe, you won’t eat me anytime cause you are my friend,” said Po and then he laughed loudly and a little bit made Lilo scared.

Since that day, the panda and the honey bear became pen friend. They did everything together. They sang, gathering food, danced, and did the other things always together.
But their parents didn't know about their habit that always played together. They keep it secret.
Actually, there was a rule that prohibits a panda to play with a bear. That's because in the ancient ancestor of pandas ever eaten by a bear. It made them mutually hostile to each other for a long time. A river divided the forest  into two sides. The pandas lived in the right side that full of many kind bamboos, and the bears lived in the left side.  It was the reason why the pandas and the bears would never beyond its boundary respectively.

Therefore, Po and Lilo always played in the river bank. When they are engrossed in playing, Po's mom saw them and immediately asked to go home. He looked angry. Then, she forbade Po to play with the bear.
Dry season arrived. The river became dry up. Many fish died. Suddenly, on Sunday evening, the forest was burned by fire. The fire burned the right side of the forest. That's po's home.. The fire was expanded by the blowing wind and already devoured a half of the forest.
Lilo who was lying under a tree saw it and quickly ran toward the panda’s house. Before, Lilo asked for help from his father and the others bear to help the pandas. But they refused it. He also told that there was a panda who had saved his life. Unfortunately, they  ignored his demand and he felt disappointed.
            Lilo surprised to see the pandas settlement that have been destroyed, he searched for his friend, po. When lilo was saving the panda family, some bears came to help. Lilo is very glad to see that and all the pandas can be saved. The pandas gave thank to the bears.
And finally they forget problem that had been happened and lived harminously ever after.

1 komentar:

  1. Nice story, can fulfill the generic structure. Keep writing and explore your talent.

    -c_i-

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